One day, there was a man named Macbeth. He was a brave man who fought for his country. He wanted to be king but his friend, Duncan, was crowned as king. His wife wanted to help Mabeth become king. Macbeth went to the king and they had a sword fight. They only battled for a little bit, and Macbeth won. Macbeth was very happy to become the king, but he felt guilty about his battle with Duncan.
Macbeth was afraid that he would get in trouble for his battle with King Duncan. He thought that his friend Banquo, who was a tattletale, would get him into trouble. Macbeth decided that Banquo should have a battle with a warrior that Macbeth hired. Macbeth’s warrior won the battle and Macbeth felt even more guilty. Macbeth saw a scary ghost of Banquo. Macbeth was very upset and knew it was bad to fight with his friends.
2 comments:
Brittany, I think your story is a great interpretation of Macbeth. You told the story very detailed but I think you could have added something like candy or games that would captivate the kids attention. Otherwise I really enjoyed your story :D
Scariness level:2/5
Sticking to the story:5/5
Scariness Level: 2 [out of 5] Accurate telling of events: 4 [out of 5] "
Great job! I loved how you said banquo was a tattletale! very creative!
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